OPENING: I’m at my grandma’s on my stool near my desk talking to the reader and then I start to tell my story.

SETTING: I’m at the bromton cemetery in chelsea near my house where I take my Nan’s dog out for walkies. Then I get the reader to know the rest of the characters,mum,dad,my brother,my gran. Oh I almost forgot pual and Bob the bromton cemetery security guards.

Fiction trigger: One day I go out to take my gran’s dog out to the cemetery. When I get there though no one was there not even pual and Bob the security guards, but the gates were still open. So I was nieve and went in to the cemetery. But then the gates close.

DEVELOPMENT: I start gavering clues and giving the reader to think what’s going to happen so they  read on and are exited. Then I slowly give the awnsers to the readers. But I give the information slowly so I don’t give everything away at once. This could be confusing to the reader.

Ending: I try to give all the awnsers but not all at the same time but I start finishing up the story.

Conclusion: I will give the end of the story a good and bad ending so its a scary horror story but with a good twist. This is so the reader doesn’t leave the story sad or disappointed.

This term I have watched star wars The Force Awakens(episode 7) in the cinema. It’s all about this evil group called the first order. They want to rule the galaxy. They all  ready own like half the galaxy already. The first order killed many jedi and there not many left,.in fact there are only 2 left. The first order has there on type of jedi but they are evil, their names are called siths or the knights of ren. so called cause there leader of the clan is called Kylo Ren.

In the movie my favourite show down was between Kylo Ren and Rey. Kylo Ren had advantage because he had trained for years of the sith and lightsaber, well Rey had never used a lightsaber and also never trained to be a jedi. But because the goodies always win,so that’s why Rey won the battle, by the hair of her chin. I would of prefer if Kylo won. Anyway, the fight was really awesome and the graphics were cool as well and it was good to watch but logically the fight was wrong.

My favourite character is bb8. bb8 is a robot or droid what ever you want to call it. Anyway, bb8 is cute and funny and I think that he is better than R2D2, he was in the last episodes of star wars, he was funny too. bb8 is so cool that Disney had to make a remote version of bb8, that you can control by your smart phone or tablets, I have my own, it’s well wicked!

The most shocking bit in the film is when Kylo killed his father, Han solo. Han solo has probably been the most nicest and best character in star wars. This part of the film made me cry, even though i don’t want to amit. Talking about crying my nan was in distraught when Han Solo died, it was really embarrassing. When my nan told my mum that Han Solo died my mum refused to watch the film. My mum loved Han Solo, I think that my mum had a crush on him when she was younger.

This my film journal I’ve watched this term. Thank you for reading.

I’ve just found a hidden pen and paper behind my bed. I hate this place (prison.). With the pen and paper I’m planing my ESCAPE! I don’t know what to do. I might bribe a guard with money, wait I have no money, I’m in prison. I really can’t stand this place dirty, smelly and horrible food. Maybe I could beat up a guard and put on their suit. Yes that what I’ll  do! But now the question is if I escape where will I go? I’m known in the city and towns, how can I lay low? That’s it, I can go and stay at my cousins house ( he’s rich) and stay their for abit intill I can come out of hiding and get a flat.

The only thought in my mind right now is, what if I fail? What if I get moved to worse prison or even executed? Never mind those thoughts, I need to think good thoughts like fairies or cupcakes. I wish that I never tried to rob the bank yet I was so far of doing so.   I only have 10 minutes untill the guards turn off lights, I need to think if my genius plan needs anymore finishing touches. Oh no the guards are coming I need to hide!..

This week I have been reading ‘ Horrible Histories ‘ it’s all about the most gory and cool facts facts in history.

My favorite part of Horrible Histories is the Tudors and Elizabeth the first. I find the Tudors cool and interesting because they were unusual clothes and what sports they had then like tennis and hunting. I’m also intrigued with how Henry viii had six wives and beheaded two of the wives and made a church for him self called Church of England. Out of his all wives he only got one male air and the others were girls. Henry viii desired a male air to the throne but only one of his wives gave him his male air(Jane seymore.) the rest of the wives gave him girls. So Henry’s most loved wife was Jane seymore. Henry’s last wife Catherine parr out lived Henry and ruled the country until she died. Henry’s son Edward vi took after Catherine died but he died not long after. Then Lady  Jane Grey, took after him, but she only reigned for nine days(that’s crazy)

my favorite Tudor who reigned was Elizabeth the first because, she has marvelous dresses in her portraits and also has lovely jewelry. This is what I have been reading in the last week.  Thank you for  reading this journal entry.

This term I have been reading Percy Jackson and the Lightning thief.It is all about Greek mythology.I find this interesting because my grandad is Greek and he likes Greek mythology.Percy Jackson and the Lightning thief is the first book out of the series.I would personally advise people to read this AMAZING book.

My favourite battle in this book is(there is loads of battles.) percy Jackson against ares,the God of war.Percy only wins by using his power of water.He gets this power from his dad Poseidon,he is the god of the sea.Poseidon his one of the biggest and most powerful lest of the gods,as he is the brother of Zeus! The King of gods.

My favourite character is grover,the protecter of Percy.He wants to find pan the god of the forest and animals.But,to do that he would have to be a searcher. To be a searcher he has to prove himself. But he strongly believes that he will prove himself so he can be a SEARCHER!

The most shocking bit of the book is when,one of his best friend betrays him and try to kill Percy(Luke),this was horrible. Luke tried  to kill Percy because the gods gave him a mission that was really hard and gave him a scar for life. So he went to the god of the Titans. The god of the Titans told Luke to kill Percy so he won’t ruin there plan. Luke won the battle and ran away but the half blood camp found Percy and made him better.

This is my journal entry of the book I have been reading,Percy Jackson and the Lightning thief. Thank you for reading my journal entry.